This is really good for a first big build! It would definitely fly as is and thats impressive.
You'll want some tpu bumpers for the ends of the arms as well. (wasn't sure if they were already part of the prints.)
The vtx looks like its hard mounted to the carbon, you dont want to do that unless it specifically say so. Some thick 2x sided tape at least with some zip ties can work, or a printed cradle is better. The carbon will interfere with the vtx signal, so ideally you want the vtx in the middle, with power wires routed away. Dont be afraid to mess with the antennas some to get them away from carbon and in effective positions as well.
You could rotate the esc and resolder the power to go out the side or possibly front for max signal clarity. You also dont want the fc/esc ports touching directly if you can help it, they damage easier when touching if you crash. Moving them would also allow you to change the direction of the gummies so that the esc has more space between it and the carbon and is less likely to accidentally short.
I think the wires on the esc might need more solder, but it's hard to tell. Thats happens a lot, I'm still redoing some of my first ones. You can send me pics of solder pads if you want to 2x check any.
Some heat shrink around the capacitor and power pigtail protects the cap and insulates it a bit.
twist up the wires on the UARTs, use a bit and tape to protect them/get them away from the battery strap a bit. Zip ties can work as well. Ultimately you'll want to more permanently mount all the components and shorten the wires.
Those battery straps and pads can get slippery quick. you'll want to make sure the pad stays clean and get some rubber bands or more straps/something to go across the battery in the other direction and secure it a bit more. There's upgraded straps and pads you can get eventually, they're cheap-ish and worth it imo.
Be careful with the camera regardless of extra prints, it's definitely hanging out there. If you are into designing, deleting the carbon plates and making a mount for the standoffs should be better and could pretty much just be 3 cylinders. That bottom plate would be a lot of bumper then and might actually make it go from risky to very secure.
also, if its a knock off frame, make sure youre checking all the screws as you fly. You might want to locktite them once youre finished with the setup.
This really is a great job, most of these suggestions are just fine tuning/longevity stuff. Looking forward to some flight footage!